Tuesday, 3 June 2008

The Embrace

My curls lie dark as midnight
On the sunshine of her hair
I inhale the perfume of her skin
Her green eyes close in pleasure
While my brown eyes open wide
The world stands still as we begin to spin.


Anonymous said...

Luka, lovely--thank you my dear. A truly beautiful embrace indeed. You have a gift, love. :-)

Beau entranced.

Anonymous Boxer said...

*sigh* first two lines are really good... then it gets better.

Less is more.

Anonymous said...

Boxer , yeah-- it does. :-)

Walker said...

And around and around you go
Where you'll stop
Only you really knows

Freddy said...

Our senses are left reeling
By the words that you have written
I can't escape the feeling
That someone may get bitten

I can't help being curious
As to where, and when, and who
And was the outcome furious
And deep and GOSH and phew?

Will you meet again and repeat it
Will it be a growing passion
Can I come along and watch you
Or join in, in my own fashion?

Oh my fantasies are getting
So much wilder my the minute
I can even see the setting
And can picture my place in it

SO, hey, my sexy brown-eyed girl
Let's take a little chance
Let's give this thang a little whirl
Let's get together and dance

Freddy said...

I'll bring the baby oil shall I?

bittersweet said...

very beautiful, just like you x

Jackie Adshead said...

That's beautiful. And non sexual I think? Daughter? Sister? Friend?

Luka said...

Beau - thank you, darling. x

Anonymous Boxer - I whole-heartedly agree, less is very much more.

Walker - well, you'll know too if I write another verse...

Freddy - that's brilliant! Saucy but brilliant!

Bittersweet - *blush*

Jackie - you are a very perceptive woman.

Brian said...

....Spinning on that dizzy edge
I kissed her face and kissed her head
And dreamed of all the different ways I had
To make her glow
"Why are you so far away?" she said
"Why won't you ever know that I'm in love with you
That I'm in love with you"
Just like heaven.

Luka said...

Brian - I love that song! Oh, Fat Bob, he's just the best....

Freddy said...

Why thank you Miss Luka x

I am indeed brilliant, but little appreciated.

Luka said...

Freddy - well, *I* appreciate you x